This is the world , a place full of war , solider fighting for a cause that is clear to them until the point of death then the thought of war becomes clouded .
Army’s of men marching foward to what they think is victory and glory but will be Chaos and death but to the leader of the army that has a thurst for war a nothing else causing his most deadicated men to follow him init the battle field with odds 3 to 1 to the soldiers knowledge each of them think they are surrounded by veteran killers when they are recruits joining because most of the men are dead so more body’s are needed for this endless war
July 8, 2015 at 11:00 am
This reminds me of a Doctor Who episode where the soldiers have been fighting for so long that they have forgotten why they are fighting.
There are lots of ideas here – which will you develop into you creative writing piece?
Select 3 lines from Come On, Come Back and try to develop a character from this.
What about those full stops?